I make love to strings that master me
like puppets…..
Snowy angels call me home, but
do I dare leave my love song behind?
I was yours the first time I strummed
melodies, fingers in foreplay, virginal….
You turned my heart into a ballad, my
first breath into you….
I slept, dreaming of you, drifting
in ghostly silver….
I never imagined I would fall onto
your earth, your hymn…..
You brought me back….to you
If I stayed…..
smonaghan119
This poem is like the reflection of a fact, that emotions have a way of owning us, rewarding us and punishing us, it’s a continual circle. I find love to be something that torments far more than it gives a feeling of safety though, perhaps that is just me…
Well written, I enjoyed this.
Sean
angelicdarkness70
Thank you Sean….the movie was wonderful. I would agree
that our emotions do have a way of owning us, sometimes
we lose ourselves, and yes, torments like a a wound that
just won’t heal.
snowfox66
I am afraid that this is one movie I will NOT go to see. It is really a sad movie and I don’t need more sadness or tear jerkers in my life. I went to see one with a friend about two kids with cancer and the girl lived but the boy did not. My dad died of cancer. I couldn’t stand “death of a salesman” nor “the shootist” I would rather see funny movies, adventure movies and others which are entertaining or thought provoking with out causing one to delve into the darkness of depression while and after the movie plays. Sorry.
angelicdarkness70
Why are you telling me you are sorry, it’s NOT
like I told anyone to go see the movie. It was
MY choice. I however did go see it and was
inspired to write a poem. Also, my dad died
from cancer 3 months ago, we were NOT
close, but that didn’t deter me from seeing the
movie, and the movie has a good ending…;)
snowfox66
I am glad you were able to handle it.